Describing+Feelings


 * We worked as a class at showing not telling about the feelings of characters. Specific details about a characters actions and appearance can show us emotions without us stating them. Check out some fun and descriptive ways to let readers know your character is angry without using the word. **




 * SHOWING FEELINGS 1 (by Travis)**

Jime's face turned purple. He looked steamed up enough to set off the fire alarm. He was clenching his teeth so hard it was lucky he didn't chip a tooth.


 * SHOWING FEELINGS 2 (by Scott)**

Bob's face was red as fire. He whacked Jim in the head and glared at him. He was about to punch him again when he slipped and fell. He got up slowly, his eyes glowing.


 * SHOWING FEELINGS 3 (by Amber)**

Willie's face puffed up. His nostrils went in and out completely silently. His face was red as a red hot chilli pepper. He curled his hands into fists. His eyebrows crunched down and he gave John a nasty, terrible look.


 * SHOWING FEELINGS 4 (by Dylan)**

Sweat popped out on Jim's face. His eyes narrowed into little slits. His teeth were shaking and his hands were clenched tightly into fists. He walked slowly toward Dylan. "Now, you're in trouble," he said.


 * SHOWING FEELINGS 5 (by Keaton)**

Jamie shot a look in Sandra's direction. Her face was as red as a pepper. She looked like she was going to explode. Her nostrils were flaring as she returned Jamie's look.